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Heart-Break and Head-ache. by ~Syco2194:iconSyco2194:



There isn't much that I can SAY,
To get me through another day,
I wish to god it was not SO,
but it is for a fact, and for a fact I know,
I held on to this dream so LONG,
and now I find, it's only gone.

The only thing that I could SAY,
Is that I really want you to stay,
But I see now, that this is GOODNIGHT,
My mind is blurred, as is my sight.

THEY
SAY

I wish and wish this was not TRUE,
My heart is broken, my soul is blue,
I thought that he was my only LOVE,
and that I found my other dove,
I always said never say NEVER,
I said that I would love you forever,
they say every love eventually DIES,
but I thought instead our love would fly.

BUT
MY

I wished and prayed that this was true LOVE,
I thought that we would soar above,
I suppose it is what it IS,
and I guess this is showbiz,
now it looks like our love DEAD,
so many words are left unsaid.
©2007-2009 ~Syco2194
:iconsyco2194:

Author's Comments

Title intrigues,
Capital & Bolded words make the impact,
The entire poem captivates.

This was written about my ex.
It was a very sad break-up.

Therefore, it is a very sad poem.


Enjoy & Comment.
Thank you.

Comments


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:icondarksorrows:
wow this is great i just broke up with my boy friend and some days this is exactly how i fill

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what makes me fill this pain and fill insain
:iconsyco2194:
Yes, relationships are quite complicated.
I'm glad you like it :).

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Cara <3:shakefish:
:iconwertysachu:
wow this is neat.. do u mind if i save it in my computer?
i never actually had a girlfriend but i did love this girl that liked me back and i can relate to this too
awesom =)

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Werty :headbang:
Free are the insAne. :censored:
:iconsyco2194:
I don't mind if you save it :).
Thanks for faving it :D.

--
Cara <3:shakefish:

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